shore/world *NPAC NOMINATION APRIL 03*
pencil grey sandscinnamon swirlwith charcoal blackagainst the faintest flesh chalk blushgulls reel reading patternsof rilled runes lacking patentsunderstood by intuitionas a dynamic in transitionfrom...
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this is great!! Love your word usage, the metaphors and the imagery is fantastic, truly enjoyedam
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I agree with Amberly muchlyI found it like a circlea cycleone begets anotherThe oceanthe gulls and theimages were amazing! "Don't fall away, and Leave me to myselfDon't fall away and leave love...
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Ben, I've been back to read this a number of times now - and still don't have the words to respond.Can I just say *Bravo*"Idiot, n. A member of a large and powerful tribe whose influence in human...
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Superb flow...incredible use of words here...they just sing!!GaladrielAnger has that peculiar quality of isolation; like sorrow, it cuts one off, and for the time being, at least, all relationship...
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Ebbing and flowing like the tide itself...the alliteration mimicking the sussurations of the sea...vivid images and a soothing tone...Love this part:Quote:"this is hydrogen""this is oxygen"the ocean...
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A truly awesome read here, Ben. Being a true lover of the sea, this one pulled me in like an undertow and I relished every moment of it. Bravo!sioux
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i sat and laughed.....not at your words........it was laughter brought about by the enjoyment. So dexterous in the usage of words ........that i have read it over and over..........very akin to the...
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I absolutly adore the imagery in this, it's very powerful. wonderful piece.
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